Gave the game a go, the surreal style of the game looks great and it appears to have an interesting story to go with it, sadly the game is still really rough around the edges and it feels like it was barely play tested.
I don't see other games on your page so I'll assume this is your first game, and if that is the case, great job! this is REALLY good for a first try; Still I have to mention that the game has a LOT of typos and grammar mistakes that make following the story a challenge.
I also found a bug that happens to a lot of RPGmaker games in HTML5 when it fails to read an asset, in this case a sound file, being able to phase trough objects that you are not supposed to, grabbing infinite keys, the teddy bear disappearing even after not grabbing it, events repeating themselves, the VHS/blurry filter not appearing depending on how you enter the scene etc
I also would recommend putting some actual description and screenshots on the itchio page, that would sure help in people giving it a try since the game is very visually striking I am sure a lot of people will be interested in trying it.
This comment is not mean to discourage you, I see a lot of potential in this game and in your work as a developer and I would love to see what else can you make with a little more practice and time!
Awwww I love it sooo much!!!! The atmosphere is so strong and I love how you depict Ren!!! You are so talented!!! It's so nice and words can't express how much I love it... Thank you so much for drawing and posting it!!!! ( ´ ▽ ` )ｏ♡
I didn't know what to expect but the cover image caught my attention and I'm glad it did. This had a unique feel and I really enjoyed playing, grim story aside haha. 😅
I tried not to miss anything and noticed a few things, such as there's an interaction on one piece of fence in the first room that hasn't been translated. Also after leaving the house in the forest, it allows you to go back to the other areas such as the bar and first area but doing that seems to re-trigger some scenes/events that have already happened and locks out being able to go to the last area. The only other thing is the translation could use a little cleaning up, there's some sentences where this stands out due to the order of words being unnatural but I didn't have any trouble understanding. 👍 Hope to see more in the future! 👍
Hiii! Thank you very much for the feedback and video!! I really enjoy watching it!!! Thanks for pointing out the bugs that I've missed to refine!!! I will modify the bugs and update the game again (maybe also add sth new lol)!! Thanks for your support!!
Hello! I didn't understand most of it but I did manage to get an ending, so that's cool. I really liked the visuals. The slightly blurry effect on the backgrounds reminded me of analogue horror, and I liked the collage scenery pieces. A good choice for a game about insanity.
I'm interested to see what you make in the future!
Edit: I would have liked an option to download because sometimes running games on the browser is laggy. Consider it!
If you entered the forest scene with a pig on the upper left, you have to talk to the npc and get the clue of the key to go inside the pig, and then you would be able to continue the game XD!!
Don't hesitate to reach me again if there's more questions!! Thank you for playing!!
wow! thank you for replying! My apologies! Maybe I didn't understand the meaning of the conversation! I'll continue the whole game! please keep up the good work!
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I don't see other games on your page so I'll assume this is your first game, and if that is the case, great job! this is REALLY good for a first try; Still I have to mention that the game has a LOT of typos and grammar mistakes that make following the story a challenge.
I also found a bug that happens to a lot of RPGmaker games in HTML5 when it fails to read an asset, in this case a sound file, being able to phase trough objects that you are not supposed to, grabbing infinite keys, the teddy bear disappearing even after not grabbing it, events repeating themselves, the VHS/blurry filter not appearing depending on how you enter the scene etc
I also would recommend putting some actual description and screenshots on the itchio page, that would sure help in people giving it a try since the game is very visually striking I am sure a lot of people will be interested in trying it.
This comment is not mean to discourage you, I see a lot of potential in this game and in your work as a developer and I would love to see what else can you make with a little more practice and time!
Keep up the good work!
janky but the art is really cool
Hi!
I really liked the story of this game so much that I drew some fan art!
So, would you mind if I post this somewhere, like pixiv?
I will put the link to the game.
Hiii!! Ofcourse plz feel free to post it!! I would love to see it too plz leave the link of your art for me ;D Thank you so much for the comment!!
Hi!!!
Thank you so much for allowing me to post the fan art!
here is the link!
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/113639119
Awwww I love it sooo much!!!! The atmosphere is so strong and I love how you depict Ren!!! You are so talented!!! It's so nice and words can't express how much I love it... Thank you so much for drawing and posting it!!!! ( ´ ▽ ` )ｏ♡
Thank you for saying so!!!!
I am really glad!!!
I love the characters you create so I am glad I was able to draw them!
I would like to continue to draw them!
Keep up the good work on creating games, etc!!!!!!
Thank you so much!!!! Looking forward to your future drawings as well!!!
I didn't know what to expect but the cover image caught my attention and I'm glad it did. This had a unique feel and I really enjoyed playing, grim story aside haha. 😅
I tried not to miss anything and noticed a few things, such as there's an interaction on one piece of fence in the first room that hasn't been translated. Also after leaving the house in the forest, it allows you to go back to the other areas such as the bar and first area but doing that seems to re-trigger some scenes/events that have already happened and locks out being able to go to the last area. The only other thing is the translation could use a little cleaning up, there's some sentences where this stands out due to the order of words being unnatural but I didn't have any trouble understanding. 👍 Hope to see more in the future! 👍
Hiii! Thank you very much for the feedback and video!! I really enjoy watching it!!! Thanks for pointing out the bugs that I've missed to refine!!! I will modify the bugs and update the game again (maybe also add sth new lol)!! Thanks for your support!!
Hello! I didn't understand most of it but I did manage to get an ending, so that's cool. I really liked the visuals. The slightly blurry effect on the backgrounds reminded me of analogue horror, and I liked the collage scenery pieces. A good choice for a game about insanity.
I'm interested to see what you make in the future!
Edit: I would have liked an option to download because sometimes running games on the browser is laggy. Consider it!
Hiii! Thank you very much for the comment!!
I would upload download versions in a few days! Thank you!!
I really enjoyed playing this game!
Thank you for creating this!
also I love your artsyle.
but I couldn't continue the gameplay after I entered the forest.
that's because I couldn't get out of the forest.
Is this a bug? or is this continuation just in development?
sorry for my terrible English;(
Hiiii!! Thank you very much for the comment!!
If you entered the forest scene with a pig on the upper left, you have to talk to the npc and get the clue of the key to go inside the pig, and then you would be able to continue the game XD!!
Don't hesitate to reach me again if there's more questions!! Thank you for playing!!
wow!
thank you for replying!
My apologies! Maybe I didn't understand the meaning of the conversation!
I'll continue the whole game!
please keep up the good work!
Thank you so much!!! Hope you enjoy it!!